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vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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I've had this moment too. I like the "sumatra dark hair" line.

TransverseTransverseover 14 years ago
I like this.

I'm not usually a big poetry fan, but I really enjoyed that. I laughed, and actually understood it. Go figure.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

Accidents will happen.

Rayven101Rayven101almost 14 years ago
Love this!

I am really enjoying your work! this made me laugh :) I am sure for each of us there is one moment in our lives that we either wish to hear or say something similar.. Oh to be that brave.. ;)

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoalmost 14 years ago
I must say

I've never taken the time to read everything you put out. And I have one comment. You are frickin fantastic. Every single piece I though grand, and I look forward to more, so please, keep going. We don't get many poetry reads here, but I am gonna be readin your from now on, so please tell me when you post one cuz I don't check every day.

sb2009sb2009over 13 years ago
I love them all!

But this one...this one is fucking amazing!

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
What a wonderful idea

and so beautifully put. Has this been recommended? If not I certainly will. Ty

legerdemerlegerdemeralmost 7 years ago
Oh yes

I had those moments, from the other perspective. You hit the nail...

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