All Comments on 'Yard Work'

extreamly erotic.

Usually I can see those "it was all just a dream" endings coming from a mile away (pun intended!) but this one was so well written it drew me in so well I was pleasantly suprised. Nice job!

Liked it. The action is real, the scenario is great fantasy.

A bloody great story.....you had me going, in two ways!!! Loved the ending, even if it does mean that Carla is not going to be serviced.....such a pity!

Keep writing; you have a great talent for it!

Regards, IGI

This one of the worst ffm stories I ever heard penthouse had better ffm stories than this shit.

I liked it. Very well done.

cheri8

Daydream. Disappointing.