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Sitting on My Son's Lap

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/15/09

Continue this hot story...

...either have mom & son have another go round having hot humping fuck while clueless dad drives right next to them for another 2 hours (maybe do it from the son's POV this time) and add more tension in getting caught in the build-up to mom and son's cumming together (also be more descriptive when he shoots his young seed up her unprotected womb). have a post script where mom visits son in college and reveals unintended pregnancy...

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by Anonymous10/11/09

more please....

are we goin to read anymore on this i would love this to continue.

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by Anonymous11/02/09

Mike fucks his mom good and hard under dad's nose

I wish I could give this great story a rating of 500! Mike, a strong good-looking 18 year old, gets hard as soon as his mother sits on his lap. Mom feels her boy's stiff dick pressing on her ass, and is thrilled! Her pussy oozes as she wiggles down on the big hard on in her boy's shorts. Mother and son both know what they gonna do, and it is so great! They're gonna do it with poor clueless dad driving, just a few feet away! Dad can't see what his wanton wife and brazen son are up to as Mike, bold young motherfucker that he is, pulls off his mother's panties and zips down and loses his shorts. He positions his big teenage cock just right and mom slides her motherly twat down on it, down to her boy's heavy potent balls! Mom loves the fact that dumb hubby keeps jabbering away, as her son plants his big prick way up her mommy-cunt and slowly fucks the shit out of it. Mike loves making inane chit-chat with dad while his fat stiff dick plows his mother's twat, getting ready to unload his teenage balls up the same cunt he came out of. When Mike blows his balls, his mother feels her darling son's warm semen flood and overflow her mommy-twat--the best feeling a loving mother can ever have. Mom knows her big boy has A LOT more to give her where that came from!

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by Anonymous12/07/09

great

great story , please continue it , m eager to read chapter two and three!!

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by Anonymous12/07/09

Great Story!

I'd love a follow up chapter or two where they continue to fuck on the road and maybe another where (as previous poster suggested) she goes to visit at college and reveals pregnancy. Turns out husband has had a vasectomy and forced her to reveal what happened. She got kicked out of the house and has nowhere to go while son's tuition was cut off. That'd be hot!

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by Anonymous05/05/10

Awesome!

this was so hot! It got me really hard!

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by Anonymous05/31/10

Kinda Jokey, But...

...but it still made me wet!

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by Anonymous05/31/10

Good Story!

It does sound a little too fictional, but it was a good read! A follow up story about the mom visiting Mike at his college would be excellent! Perhaps for a twist, add a gang-bang on her second visit, with Mike's room mate involved ;)

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by Anonymous07/21/10

Made me cum intensly

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by Anonymous08/10/10

mmm

man that made me mmm all over~!!!

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by polotiest08/17/10

Good

Very goos storie, liked it a lot!

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by RyeandGingerAyle08/21/10

Loved it!

Made me wish I had a mom like that to sit on me and take care of this hard on I got from reading your story!

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by Anonymous08/31/10

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!

It got me REAL hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous09/10/10

mmmmm maybe she'll sit on her husbands face and get him to clean her up on the way back

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by Anonymous09/11/10

Awesome

Fucking awesome, please write more. Love the suspense of someone being so close but not know what's going on. Could been caught any moment.

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by Anonymous09/12/10

I really enjoyed this story. I wish to see more stories similar to this one. the idea of having sex in car while someone is sitting beside you is pretty amazing. I really wish to see more of same theme with different characters maybe. thanks again for a wonderful story

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by Anonymous09/29/10

no?

her husband must have a problem with his nose. no?

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by Anonymous10/13/10

wtf?

A 12 year old could do better than this!

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by Anonymous10/18/10

did the trick for me

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by xgigglesx10/24/10

ripped off

check out "mom takes a ride" by nakedsair same story.

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by Anonymous11/05/10

Five Stars!

To the last user who said ti was a rip off, who care? It's written a little differently and wonderfully told. Do another one similar to this one. Also read Bumpy Ride and Vibrations and see if they inspire you.

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by Anonymous11/27/10

WONDERFUL

I love this story. Will you continue it please.Jim jimbol@cox.net

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by AryanViking12/02/10

Wow this really got me off. Great story with awesome detail.

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by Anonymous12/10/10

Liked it..

I've done tons of reading on Literotica... (maybe I should use, "loads?" ha!)
I don't mind seeing similar stories...
You did a great job telling this one!
Please continue writing...

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by Anonymous12/12/10

Where can I find "bumpy ride & vibrations"?

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by Anonymous12/12/10

This is the third time I have read this. Good work; it is a hot read. What son would not enjoy a long ride with his sexy, desirable Mom this way. Hope it can be expanded to include the school trips.

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by Anonymous12/14/10

How about a ride in the back?

I think after a lunch of pussy, the Son should go for a long ride in the back...of Mom!

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by Anonymous12/31/10

Fruit

Pear panties are really fruity!

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by jerzzey01/01/11

car trip anyone

what an Amazing story... I Loved it... go's to show what you can really do if you set your mind... or anything else to it .... Anything is Possible..... keep Up the Great stories....

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by Anonymous02/08/11

great story

even though there have been others similar i liked your story.

btw "Bumby Ride" and "vibrations" are 2 seperate stories by the same author Skei0

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by Anonymous02/15/11

SO HOT

gosh!!! that was so very hot. youmade me come twice

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by Anonymous03/01/11

lovely mom

this was a fantastic story i wish all the moms out there shud try atleast one ride like that wid there sons to accomplish the upbringing

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by Anonymous03/05/11

It would be a good idea to see this story from the son POV and of course see what else could happend whit this story......luv it! Hope u write more ;)

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by Anonymous03/31/11

just where a boy's stiff dick belongs...

...right up his mother's cunt! I come back to this great tale of motherfucking from time to time. I love how bold young Mike is, shoving his big young prick right up his mother's twat while dumb-ass dad is driving along totally clueless that his wife is gladly opening up her motherly cunt to their big strong boy, who's about to blow his hot young balls where every son'd love to blow his--up his mommy's twat. Can you imagine the arrogant joy of the lad, shoving his fat hard cock up his own birth canal and creaming his own mother's cunt that dummy dad thinks belongs to him! A lesson to all boys obsessed with their mom's twat and all mothers wild for what their boy's got big and hard bouncing around in his pants!

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by cypher92606/26/11

There is a story like this on here but its a mom sitting on the sons lap on a bus..anyone knows where i can find that story again?

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by Anonymous06/30/11

to cypher

Mom takrs a ride is like this but no bus is in it...ill keep looking for it for u tho.
-A.

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by Anonymous06/30/11

Hey cypher

the story is "the monster on the bus"

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by frankiejohnny07/03/11

bus

cypher is it "A bus ride" by fistfullacock? 6/25/06

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by Anonymous07/08/11

Good Reader

Very good detail and excellent story telling. More stories like this would be excellent.

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by Anonymous07/27/11

great story

Great. can't wait for part 2

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by Anonymous08/05/11

sexy mom

enjoyed alot

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by oldwayne08/15/11

Way hot!

Outstanding! Just outstanding!

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by Anonymous09/04/11

They're being a bit bait

Some of the dialog between the three of them is a little bit over the top. I mean I love the plot, really inventive but sometimes way too unrealistic. Don't get me wrong, the plot in its self is hypothetical but what really doesn't cut it is the unnatural way they talk to each other at times.

Can't wait for the second installment.

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by Anonymous09/10/11

Fucking Hot

Great. Need a Part 2. Anyone know any dad/daughter stories with similar plot? ie daughter sits on dad's lap while mom drives

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by Anonymous09/16/11

love it so much!!!

got a hard on while reading all....more please...

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by Anonymous09/18/11

I liked the concept and layout of this story. I couldn't help but think... and next to a son cumming inside his mother this is what got me the horniest... the thought of the husband getting frisky on the way home. The narrative of this portion of the story solely from the husbands POV... he's hard, has her bent over the vehicle at a dark rest stop... he slides deep inside her and feels the wetness of his sons cum inside her. He is turned on beyond belief as he leans over her and whispers..... well, I'm not the author so whatever he/she would write would be interesting to read. sooooo naughty

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by Anonymous09/21/11

wow

need a squeal where the mother vists here son in college

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by Anonymous09/23/11

Nasty it is!

Nasty it is! All dialogues are written very intelligently which have double meaning. Very well written story. Yes, I would like to read part-2. May be some variation in sitting in rest of the drive. May be son can sit in mothers lap.

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by Anonymous09/25/11

One of the best short stories

I feel like this is one story that could come true. I hope there is a follow up

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by Anonymous09/29/11

wow...

I like it its short and directly to the point. I'm soakin wet while reading it.. more please..

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