All Comments on 'Little Black Dress'

I really enjoyed the story, keep it up!

Loved it. To the point and explains your feminine point of view. Would loved to have been there to watch or take you the first time!

Rob

"some guy cummed.."

cummed?

Huh?

After an orgasm, it means, you came.

"She cummed to the store with me'. "She came to the store with me".

"That was good, I came" "that was good, I cummed".

Sounds like it was written by a man, though.

Struth, what kind of a pub are you guys hanging out at where a bloke jerks off onto a woman's clothes? That's freakin' nasty!

Anyway, liked the story, especially the movie style opening telling you how it ended and then retelling the tale. Keep on writing!

It was a good read, and the sex was steamy. You could stand to have more of it, though.

That was awesome....

you got 2 warm loads from that one.....in less than an hour!

flashmor65@gmail

Well written but ended abruptly. Good news: reader wanting more means you did good. Bad news: reader also left unsatisfied. 4 stars

Too sort. Ended too abruptly