All Comments on 'How I Became Big Sister's Sex Slave'

by Gimli37

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
not very good

you made the brother into a real pussy whipped asshole no guy would act like that when she started to party after the parents left he would stay at a friends when he came home early and saw a car in the drive he would either make a lot of noise so she knew he was home or just drive by and visit friends keep it realistic and believable please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes

I agree with the previous comment, you really messed the story up big time. It's bad enough you're writing about incest but you can't even write a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ruined by having the sister a slut

totaly ruins the story when the sister is fucking 2 guys.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Idiots

The previous commenters are fucking idiots. The story is great & the encounter with the two guys from the beginning helps to provide background. Much better than just the bro&sis getting it on from the get-go. Love the story too. Definitely made me cum ^_

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good job!

One of my favorites and I've read a lot of stories here. Big sister and a touch of bondage make it into one of my fantasies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great story

loved it one of my favorites,and with 3 older sisters of my own no bloody wonder

nsmiladnsmiladover 9 years ago
it was really great

keep doing the good work

You made me hot as hell by considering myself as the slutty Brian.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

Good story

one of my favorites incest stories

wishing myself bieng Brian

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mmmmmmm

My name is Brian and would like a sister like Karen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Please make another

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

That was so fucking hot is your sister available?

mBrowmBrowabout 6 years ago
Hot romp

Nicely written, and quite erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fantastic

It is soooo good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
story

Part one was getting hotter and we went into part two and you crash and burned

otti1otti1over 2 years ago

Gut so, weitermachen.

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