All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Opens Up Ch. 01'

Very good build up so far, i like it a lot.

The bast part is the slow build up. keep it this way.

Good start. Open that flower up so the bees can take ALL of the pollen.

Excellent. Avoid being too narrative. But, I read on ly the chapter1. Good luck.

You have written about the slow yet steady progress to openness. This is so well written that I can relate to overcoming my religious training about sex.

Fantastic story. Slow and steady, fantastic build up.

Yes, the slow build up is the way to keep us all interested … It is the seduction more than the conquest … But the conquest is nice too … :)

Your writing style is so perfect ♥️