All Comments on 'Mrs. Anderson Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
S-O-O-O HOT-!-!-!

Mrs Anderson is such a HOT married, middle-aged whore!!! I LOVED this! I want to hear all about her cheating ass! Maybe she'll get in bed with little Bobbie Gershwin and teach her how to be a hot little whore!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

You should have continued this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More, please

This definitely needs more chapters, there is so much potential here.

NoSuchGuyNoSuchGuyabout 13 years ago
Please more chapters

This story has so much potential. I know so many plots you can write. Please contact me. Sorry for my bad english, I am German.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot

damn thats fuckin hot, I'mm looking forward to future instalments

Cant wait to see if he take her as his slut, the whore she wants to be treated as

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

If only that were true

chytownchytownover 7 years ago
One Hot Story****

Looks like this is the end. To bad it could have been good for at least three more chapters. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too quick

Half the story was the same as the first one. We got the blow job story the last time.

There was no seduction. He's not even kissed her or gone down on her.

There is so much content you have missed out.

It was hurried, lazy writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A Lazy writer

I've read a couple of your stories. The pattern is the same---you offer a very minimal plot line, very quickly move into some sexual activity and then quit. You offer the barest inference of a plot, but you quit before it's even a story. This isn't writing; it's barely more than just typing (or is it now called keyboarding?)

bobareenobobareenoalmost 2 years ago

One trick pony, This part should’ve been part of the first submission. Thus was just a masturbation screed, and not particularly interesting.

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