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The New Client Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/22/09

WHY?

WHY? debase yourself like this? It must be a strange and weird world that you inhabit. A wife that cares nothign for you. And you with ZERO pride ZERO ego and ZERO sized prick to go with it. Take your fetish elsewhere.

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by Anonymous08/22/09

Interesting ....

As far as the other commenter:

I am sure that everyone who reads this has some sexual desire that others would condemn.

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by Anonymous08/22/09

why

why do you have to write about your sickness.

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by Britease08/22/09

Well?

Goodish effort, but think of breaking up the paragraphs a ''lot more ''. Otherwise it's such a difficult read;

There's no need to do great long uninterupted scripts, because everyone gets bored with them. break it up --- make it sharp and to the point --- you have some talent so use it and make your stories more readable. It's not diff-icult once you try. If you want some advice (Am I the one to give it??? ) please ask, because I enjoyed youe story, but the layout wasn't good. Move on --- beleive me , it's worth it.

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by oriondog08/22/09

Nice first story

Keep writing about watch her your wife suck and fuck her way into our hearts, Thanks

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by digdaddyrich08/23/09

So she likes to suck cock

He should make sure that all she does when they get home is suck her husband's cock then he can roll over and go to sleep, after he tells her to takes care of herself.

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by michael195008/23/09

Nice read.

Either you were dreaming a fantasy or relating an interesting event. Nonetheless liked the potential of further entries in this couples adventures, it would be perfect if the husband were bold enough to confront the wife and demand a play by play of anything new. As the hippies say write-on-man. LOL.

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by richard_f08/23/09

Excellent first story

This is a fine first effort. I particularly enjoyed the scene where the husband watches the wife necking and petting with her soon to be lover.

Hopefully there is another chapter in the works that describes what happens when they get home.

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by Anonymous08/23/09

Diversify

Good beginning. In business and probably all things I've found it best to diversify. Your character should do likewise and attract more clients. Do make a few of them more demanding and greedy then this gentleman. The customer is always right even when he's doing something wrong.

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by paula and bob08/28/09

Why?

Why do people have to make negitive comments because they do not enjoy the theme of the story.

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by Anonymous11/26/09

good story..others fuck off

keep going, its nice to see your stories develop...as to these weirdos who love to read, get off on it then condemm.
Back to the bible boys....keep your hands in your pockets.

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by Anonymous01/28/14

deja vu

just a copy of another one of your stories......what give?

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