All Comments on 'Sabrina's Submission Ch. 07'

gyrl is loving this story soooooooooo much!

gyrl is loving this story soooooooooo much!

gyrl is loving this story soooooooooo much!

are planning anymore chapters?

you a great way of writing, keep going either with this one or new ones

Is this story line done or just a break???

Please finish this story so hot and sexy. why did she have to get dressed and what was the special thing about to happen?

I hope you continue it at some point.

I hope you continue this at some point. It's interesting so far.

I cannot wait to read more!

This story has alot of promise but master is a messed up individual. An order should be possible at least not set up to fail. He said "you will do it yourself, in front of me!" he ordered. about the but plug but she gets punishment for waiting for him like he commanded. if you catch your errors this will be a great story if I were master I would bring her to the brink over and over all day keep her horny and reminded of who is in control. Keep up te good work.

This is surely not the way you wanted to end this story, or is it? There are so many scenarios you could finish this story with. I would love to see a continuation.... Soon!

Very well written and very descriptive too.

However to take a strong minded career woman, kidnap her, beat her senseless and completely break her into a willing submissive ...all inside two days !!!

I knew I was doing it all wrong..lol

Next chapter please

Surely this isn't the end.

Please write more.

So why is she all dressed up? And how can she be punished for doing something she was told to do. A slave/sub in training makes enough transgressions to be punished for without Master making them up!

I like the way you write and I like the content. Off to find more :)

This is my favorite story you have written. Please continue the story. Thanks.

That's when she kicked him squarely in the balls. When he fell to the floor she stomped on his balls repeatedly as he passed out. And then she continued to stomp on them, making sure they would never be used again. Then she changed her clothes, took everything she wanted, packed it in his car and left. End of stupidity.

Great story but now you have left us all hanging``

This mind phuquing little twat is no Dom! Just an unhinged abuse cunt who probably tore the wings off butterflies and skinned small furry animals as a child.