All Comments on ''Star Bound' Ch. 02'

...play-says. I was looking for the phrase "spacesuit" when I found your first chapter and then continued reading out of curiosity. This one is A tiny bit too aggressive for me, but I understand 'different strokes, for different folks' as the saying goes. I am interested in seeing WHAT plans Ani has in store for the last "member" of the Athor line and hope you will add another chapter where she (ultimately) gains control over him! ~ Wait is that being to predictable or formulaic?

I wish you would continue this story Ive stumbled upon it two times and you have a great beggining to it.

Your a talented writer so I will check back soon :D

Grammar too...

I agree, please keep writing this, as much as I enjoy the dynamics between these two as they are, I'd quite like to see our leading lady gain the upper hand and take back some control.