All Comments on 'The Neighbors'

by cuninglinguist61

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goldbug30goldbug30over 14 years ago
excellent

I liked it a lot... good build up and perfect finish. I can see the theme where he will be knocking at the girls' doors too so that intrigues me. Whether the mom joins in or not is up to you but so far... so GOOD.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh yeah

I do believe that we should have mom and daughters at a Pool party. Damn; don't stop now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
daughters

please, take ALL ASSES!

really

meowman1990meowman1990over 13 years ago
good

I liked your story just wish there were more

maddictmaddictover 4 years ago
Life is good

Yes you are welcome to come back. I wasn't planning on letting you leave any time tonight.

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