All Comments on 'Forced Sex with our Maid'

by cj200267

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
poor

Extremely poor writing effort. Poorly constructed and poorly written

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It was NOT poor

I liked the story a lot. It was nicely edited(I get very distracted by typos and misspellings). I look forward to reading more of your work.

FunseeeekrrFunseeeekrrover 14 years ago
The kitty is away, the rat will play

Several years ago, we had an Au Pare to help with our child and around the house as we both worked away from home. One weekend, I took the child and went to visit my parents about 100 miles south of us.

Prisanna, was a Philipine girl who had lived with her overly strict parents up until the time we hired her. Once she got a taste of freedom and some cock, she was like a kid

in a candy store. She walked into our bedroom in the middle of the night and started sucking my husband's cock while he slept. Before he was aware, she was riding cowgirl on his 7" pole. He didn't tell me about it until she had moved on, but gave her more cock all during the weekend and then never again.

When there is another sexy woman in the house, ladies, WATCH OUT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice

I would want to know more about this. Sequel?

MoeUnleashedMoeUnleashedover 12 years ago
Nice.

Nice...you ought to continue this.

CrissySnowCrissySnowabout 10 years ago
Inspire

I like stories like this I think I'll do one too but up the sexy factor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I think you could've written better but it's a great idea.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Hot horny boss

Mm I love it

roftlheoryroftlheoryabout 6 years ago
Not a bad story....

You have a good idea and I liked the set up of the story, however you should really use quotations when a character is talking. The sex scene could be longer too with more foreplay. Thanks for the read.

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