All Comments on 'Breast Feed Neighbors'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story bad spelling

The only real problem I had with the story was the misspelling of the word massage. It was spelled message which is a word and probably why spell check didn't catch it. I was so distracting it made it hard to enjoy the story. Other than that good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Want more

I think your story was great! Is there more to cum?? The only thing I must suggest is proof reading. There were a lot of errors.

Chelms38Chelms38over 1 year ago

I have been lucky enough to taste breastmilk a lot over the years and if you are offered the chance then try it, you might not like it, but you won't know unless you go for it.

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