by retiresoon
The only real problem I had with the story was the misspelling of the word massage. It was spelled message which is a word and probably why spell check didn't catch it. I was so distracting it made it hard to enjoy the story. Other than that good job.
I think your story was great! Is there more to cum?? The only thing I must suggest is proof reading. There were a lot of errors.
I have been lucky enough to taste breastmilk a lot over the years and if you are offered the chance then try it, you might not like it, but you won't know unless you go for it.