All Comments on 'Bruises'

by Sapphos Sister

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Safe_BetSafe_Betover 14 years ago
Hey Chickie

I liked this one a lot. Nice reflections on the sometimes painful after effects of passion. Brava.

normal jeannormal jeanover 14 years ago
hi Sis :)

I have no constructive FB, I Just wanted to let you know I read this and enjoyed your work yet again. I especially liked this phrase-

"inky prints of gripping fingers"

You have a very visual poem here, nice work.

hugs,

NJ

IraniaIraniaover 14 years ago
Lovely

I felt this girl within me. Your poetry is sensual, provocative, and erotic. I am aroused.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 14 years ago
Another brilliant endeavour

I felt each bruise as you wrote of it being inflicted. Smiles M.

rubyslipperrubyslipperover 14 years ago
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oooooooh...how i love you more than ever

peachesmelbapeachesmelbaover 14 years ago
Truly

our physical bruises and scars heal long before the mental and emotional ones do... "The one who bruised her heart" - that's perfect my friend!

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