by blackfen
The story needs some dialogue other than just fucking to make it a complete story. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the fucking scenes, but there should be something else going on besides just fucking. Maybe showing more of the love between mom and her son would brighten the story up. It's still a good story though.Thanks ......Rich
liked it,wanted more, more story lines, look forward to him taking that hot ass also
The sex is great for just another mom son story. I hope three is alittle deeper in text. Good luck.
Don't worry about the bullshit literary comments. The story is about fucking and it is great
Don't rely so much on cliches and catchphrases to tell your story.
And yeah, let's go outside the fucking to describe and flesh out the relationship further.
And for those who criticize the boy's cock size in the story, come on. What part of the title "My Son's Huge Cock" escaped you here? Give me (and the author) a break.
My son's dick is 14 inches, long and very thick! I enjoy every bit of it.
I came so hard to this, I love when my mom rides my dick and begs for my cum
Clearly mom wants this 11 inches a LOT! Keep it coming.
Previous comment: If you want too say something about an author, a least give a reason why instead of shouting out just for the sake of it.
LOVED IT! YA GOT CARRIED AWAY, lol BUT I LOVED IT. THERES ALWAYS ONE FANTASY THAT NEVER GETS FULFILLED. MINE WAS HAVING AN 11 INCH COCK, lol DIDN'T QUITE GROW MINE THAT LONG. CAN'T WAIT TILL MAMA TAKES THAT HUGE SUCKER UP HER ASS!
This one turned to mean. So, I'm done. Time to move on.
I read this story a long time ago and had to come back to it after finally creating an account. Love this story and I love this kinky cock hungry mother!!
(11/7/2021) Wow, well I have a couple of critiques. First: his dick is 11" long and 7" wide? That's the shape of a stubby American football. I don't think that would work very well. Maybe you meant 11" long with a circumference of 7". That would make it about 3" thick. Second: "I felt the massive cock slide into me with no effort; my pussy was so wet it was like a knife through hot butter."? It should be "like a hot knife through butter". Still, it was a great read. Five stars from me. Now, is mommy going to share in the next chapter?
Not much dialog from the son, but when you got a cock that needs a tattoo of “Wilson NFL” on it if at least “NCAA” with those measurements. Still 4* fir the MIKF thst likes to fuck that much and often
it was great i had the biggest hadron i ever had, it stayed that hard for at least 3 hours. the amount of cum coming out of its head was 3 times more than ever before. thanks a lot can't wait for the next letter