All Comments on 'Chemical Concocktion Ch. 09'

I enjoyed your series, so please do continue.

Cheers from Spain

Love this story!

Cant wait to see where the Teacher and Jennifer go..and Maybe Beth a 3 - some? Will Beth keep her Jealousy under control?

Can't wait for chapter 10, like an earlier commenter I'm excited to see where this leads, and if my girls wind up exposed to the potion...

That last comment should read, if more girls wind up exposed to the potion. Proofreading error!

Can't wait for Jennifer to get together with Beth and Mr.Deering. it would heighten her Sexuality. and Maybe Jennifer could mention her friend Meisha to Beth and they could get her into the Harem.

Good Story keep it Going theres No End in-sight except College. and they Beth and Jennifer could stay close to Home and be at Mr.Deering's beck and Call.

cant wait for the next chapter need to involve more girls

Too Incomplete, where are the other chapters?

finish the series all rady

This is a very well done story. I'd like to see more.

Unfortunately for the few years I taught math in a private school it was all boys.

I really like this story, it has a lot of potential for future chapters.

I like the idea that Dan doesn't know everything about the potion and how it changes Beth and Jennifer. His inner struggle is on an good level, too. It's not too much and it isn't non existent, I like it that way.

Over all I really would like to read more chapters of this story. So feel encouraged to continue your writing, I will read it.

I love the series and hope you continue!

This is hands down one of the best series i've read on literotica. I hope you continue it.

Love it. Why'd you stop?

Please continue the story i really enjoyed it :D

Thank you :)

Please come back to this story!

More Please.....

Like to see a more puzzled Jennifer and her +/- list with consise intelligent questions of her Master/Mistress, with no low intelligence bimbo extremes (tone dn)

I would have rated your story higher, but there is still way too many waves to explore for this to end so soon.

This Story and wish you would write some more for . You need to Explore Jennefer & Beths Relationship. and as a Good Slave will bring her toy for him to Use. Then there Myesha and Jennifer Maybe Beth can make Myesha a 3rd Slave for the Teacher. and Eventually the Parents of these girls will need to become Involved and Question some of the Changes they are going through.

love the story but you need to continue it .really a hot story .her turning to a sub and Jennifer .

Read the whole story over the past few days and left comments of course knowing there were chapters ahead and it seems like you worked on all of those things already. This is a nice story with an interesting plot to it and a lot of potential.

Good start to the story, unfortunately it suffered a slow lingering death in the last few chapters.

Such a shame that this series is unfinished.

And what happens all to often on this site.... an unfinished story. Bummer I liked this one