All Comments on 'Carrie Heffernan's Strip Debut Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Longer

Great stories, but please make each chapter longer. You risk the possibility of your readers getting bored and giving up on the series.

malonehamburgmalonehamburgover 14 years ago
Fantastic

Carrie ist a very sexy girl und your story is very hot. I hope the next sequel will be soon posting.

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