All Comments on 'Seducing Mom'

....of erotica. When you write as if the story is true you have to tone it down.Or not.-pistolpackinpete

She may be his slave but he needs to show her a lot of love. Making her a sex slave wouldn't be near as good as making her totally infatuated and in love with him, to the point where her heart aches when he isn't near her. Showing her how much he loves is what she needs to complete her transition. I hope in the next chapter there's more focus on how their affair develops to the point where they think of each other as man and wife. Thanks......Rich

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Your writing is excellent! Good mixture of description and dialogue. Loved it when mom wore stockings and heels for her son - huge turn on for me. Keep him cumming inside her without condoms - possible pregnancy is very erotic too. Keep up the great work!

Hot mom=-son adventure... loved the ass fuck part also.... fantasy of mine... Keep them CUMMING!!!

Keep on writing.

I got turned off with the development of sex slavery. I cannot see how one feels that they love someone by being cruel or feel loved by someone that is cruel to them. I'll try Chapter 2 but I hope the story line doesn't continue in this vein.

Very nice you should right one but the son being more dominant

IT'S NOT MY KIND OF STORY, I WOULD NEVER TREAT MY MOTHER LIKE THAT. MAYBE A SISTER, OR AN AUNT. BUT NEVER MOM. THE STORY WAS WELL WRITTEN AND SEEMED TO BE WELL THOUGH OUT.IT HAD IT'S. GOOD POINTS. THE BUTT FUCK WAS HOT, AND I THINK SHE LOVED IT.YOU KNOW HE NEVER USED THE CONDOMS, NOT EVEN IN THE BUTT FUCK. ...................................LAROC OF AGES

to Dom is more than a bit of a stretch. I too wish there could have been a loving, learning, shared relationship. oh well. I will try another author.

btw: everclear and force is not seduction

...I gave up when they both started smoking. Yuk - 2star

South Londoner, what the hell are you on about? Folk DO smoke, so get used to it. my favourite smoke is after I have given my wife a damn good fucking. So go and get a life. Loving this story, looking forward to reading more.

Now this is the BEST INCEST EVER. Don't mess up a good story by adding a third or even forth person. Moms love to fuck sons I know. a good read THANKS

Trouble in paradise?

Mom having second thoughts?

Great story, loved it.

Thank You!

I've read some of the comments about toning it down. Fuck that! I stayed hard the entire time I was reading the story! Well written and I enjoyed it immensely !

There was a little something lacking and few grammatical and a formatting error you need to clean up. However, I had to give it 5 stars. Not bad sir.

You l9st me at "RAPE"

As one who has no problem with mutually consensual incest, I did not appreciate the son spiking his mother's drinks nor the use of a threat if the mother did not have sex with him. This is not consensual. With ther preceding said, once the mother realized the safety, security and love the son offered, when compared to some of her previous dates, she knew she could fill any roll she wanted, to include being a sexual slave/mother. A provisional 5 star rating is assigned to this series.