by dangerouslydead
Some readers like tight little stories like this though, so to them it might be just right. To me I like a little more detail in the story and a lot more sex. I voted 100% because of the inventive story line and good writing.Thanks....Rich
Some readers like tight little stories like this though, so to them it might be just right. To me I like a little more detail in the story and a lot more sex. I voted 100% because of the inventive story line and good writing.Thanks....Rich
Really should finish the story, kinda cowardly to not finish and show disrespect for your readers.
I get the impression that these stories were written by the same young teenage indian boy. stories are short with no substance
...to write these few sentences and what made you call this a "story"?
has still got his dribbling cock up Cantgetoff's pus leaking asshole. He appears to follow it everywhere. Two fat pedos in their basements.
Interesting approach to humiliation of betrayers -
But in this instance it seems very effective - juvenile sure - so what - tak your fun where you can find it - they wrecked his marriage -
Your style of humor is outrageous and totally entertaining. The story stunk but it was hilarious. I couldn't rate it any less than five stars.
This author hasn't submitted a story in 6 years. Too bad. I would have loved to here more about the "adventures of the Itchy Man." I thought the story was funny. I would have liked a part 2.