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Cum Eating Aunt

byKingKongDong99©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/20/09

crap

you lost me in the first sentence why do we need to need to know your size??????????????

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by Anonymous09/20/09

Me too

You lost me as soon as you announced the size of your tool. But, like a trooper I read on a few more lines. Then the poor English sentences and grammar got me gnashing my teeth and gave it up. If you want good comments, do a good job or quit!

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by Anonymous09/20/09

damn good

really good story. write more!

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by Anonymous09/20/09

Shit

Whaddaya expect from an authr who's name is KingKongDong? Of course. I know! Bragging on tool size!Getting to be the typical noob bullshit on here.

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by Anonymous09/20/09

Pure Garbage

First two paragraphs put me off. Very amateur story. Are you old enough to be on this site? This was more like the ramblings of a 15 year old virgin. Giving it a 00 score is being kind. Please give up writing.

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by Anonymous09/20/09

Geeez that sucked

Go back to school kiddo and learn grammer, as well as putting sentences together.

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by digdaddyrich09/20/09

A little rough but readable, hot content though

The author needs to reread his story before posting, and that will catch the spelling mistakes. The strange sentence structure makes it a little hard to follow, but it kept my interest. Just keep writing if you have a passion to do so, and don't pay any attention to the frivolous comments.

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by Anonymous09/20/09

Silly

Sounds like a 12 year old boy wrote this on his mom and dad's computer.

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by Anonymous09/21/09

How could anyone not like this

hot story of family desire? Don't we all want to be sexually active with members of our family? Our parents and children, as well as grandparents and aunts and uncles. What is abnormal or abhorrent about that? I shot my load when the underage daughter licked the spunk from my dad's sister's lips. Fantastic, please write more-pistolpackinpete.

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by KingKongDong9909/21/09

Acknowledged

First let me thank everyone of you for leaving a comment. However, constructive criticism is what I am looking for. Granted, I did not read it before posting or else I would have corrected many of my mistakes or even rewriten some parts but hey I was horny as hell and did not think straight. I admit: bad English, awful grammar and strangely constructed sentences. Oh well, I am not a writer just a spectator. ;)

Some comments do not deserve my attention, so I just let it be.

The question is: shall I tell you the rest of the story or not???

Tx again for sacrificing your time to read and comment on my post.
Kingkongdong99

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by Anonymous09/22/09

Grammar?

"She always wears sexy."

There's a sentence for you.

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by Anonymous09/24/09

Good one buddy!

Keep going, write more.

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by Anonymous07/09/10

Ehhh

Sucked. Learn how to proofread idiot

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by Anonymous03/28/11

keep it goin im not a snobby reader

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by Anonymous06/06/11

good story wanna hear more

Its too bad that you couldn't bang the 16 yr old, and have a 3 some,

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by Anonymous11/19/11

Never had my aunt,

Never had my aunt but my ex-sister-in-law could rival your aunt in oral skills and the tightest wettest pussy ive ever fucked or ate out. Keep it cumming. Love possible stories.

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by Anonymous01/14/12

ass

i would love to hear you fucking her in the ass.
i love to fuck my wife's asshole and she is a natural cocksucker. she loves it.

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by Anonymous07/05/12

id love to see the rest of this story. 5 out of 5

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by Anonymous05/12/13

few issues

ok your idea is great. the writing to get it across not so much...keep working at it

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by Anonymous03/16/14

What a start!

I just loved the way Cum Eating Aunt started. Even though I am a bit angry that you did not let me cum in my pants, I am very intrigued by the possibilities that you have presented. Please write another part and don't keep us waiting too long.

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by Anonymous12/18/14

Good in concept, but I'm afraid your writing style is a bit hard to take. Before uploading part 2, I'd suggest finding someone to work as a proofreader/editor.

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