All Comments on 'The Long Road to Ruin Ch. 09'

A really well done story, with characters that are interesting, believable, and fun to read about, and a really nice pace and balance to the story (between dialogue, action and romance). The sex scenes are incredibly hot- besides being well written, they fit in so well with the story/characters that it creates very vivid compelling and captivating reading. Great work!

I found you, my lady! When you removed this story from fanfiction.net, I wondered where it had gone. Now I've found you. I'm enjoying re-reading this story all over again. The other reviewer was right about this story. The writing is so immersive. The characters are believable. Very well done!

Wow! Vico...

This story is so complex! Keeps you guessing! Good job!