by Lucifia
Excellent read. It flows well. I believe that this is one good example of where art does a better job than life, but where life can learn from and be stimulated by the art. In other words, art imitates life, and life imitates art. It works and it's hot. Well done!
I love this sentence: "Lucifia: I scream as you punctuate every dirty word with a hard slam into my cunt!"