All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 01'

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PseudonymAPseudonymAover 14 years ago
Yay!

You're back! Really looking forward to this one :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
yes!

yes, you're back! can't wait for the next installment...please let us know what happens to andrae... :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
it begins

it seems that the interest in your writing begins again and i for one cannot wiat for more instalments

bad_girl69bad_girl69over 14 years ago
not bad

I have enjoyed all your other two installations, so i know this will be good too. But one advice... please.... BRING NADIA BACK SOME HOW!!! lol.

baikalisanbaikalisanover 14 years ago
sigh...

Fantastic.

Welcome Back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Nice

I'm glad you're back. I like it and am looking forward to seeing more. The brothers and thier "work" & lives are interesting wtih lots of room for surprises, twists, and triumphs. Although my heart still hurts for Andre and Nadia - such a harsh fate for them. I was really routing for them. :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cool!

Another part of the puzzle begins. Thank you.

PennLadyPennLadyover 14 years ago
I'm getting...

a little confused with all of the brothers, but glad to see the next story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes the brothers are confusing

but I'm still crushing on all of them lol. But please, please, please ... can you bring Nadia back somehow? I'm crying here :(

michassmichassover 14 years ago
Nadia's soul in oldest brother?

What was it that Nadia told Alexis in private? And why do his eyes glow?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome!

Love it.

I just wish life would let you write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yippee, you're back with the brothers.

I am so glad that you have decided to write another story. I have regularly been checking this site for the next instalment and can't wait to learn more about Lindsay and what Alexis meant.

Keep it up and looking forward to the next part. (Hopefully don't have to wait too long :-) )

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
oh please pretty please

bring NADIA back... love the beginning of this story... but pls bring nadia & d back together...

sunshinesdevotionsunshinesdevotionover 14 years ago
beginings... again

Good first chapter... who's playing the music? I can't wait to see what's up with Lindsay and how his character develops.... I tried not bto be like this but I wanted to say that I am still just devastated over the last story... poor D! I was tempted to not read anymore but its just so good!! I hope she comes back. I am a happy ending kind of girl!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
ooh, spooky.

lindsay is a weird name for a guy, but it's original. i have a feeling that nadia is guiding him via messages in the wind.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
no fair!

wheres nadia!?? i want nadia bac!!!!!!:(

shortydeeshortydeeabout 13 years ago
Great

I know that I have read the stories before, but I am very glad that I started over again. Last time I missed out on a lot. I hope that somewhere along tha way you will bring NADIA back.

pmpktypmpktyabout 13 years ago
confused

I was pretty good with part 1 because only a few brothers were mentioned, and then part 2 came and it got a bit confusing, now with part 3 there is another brother and I'm not sure I can make it through. Is there any way you can provide a list of the brothers with a small description?

shortydeeshortydeealmost 12 years ago
Love !!!!!

at first sound, way cool!

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