All Comments on 'Bar Made'

Helen you are amazing! You write amazing stories, you look hot! Great pictures!!! I adore your stories

Thanks, Helen, for a wonderful story. I loved it and can't wait to read more!

This was a good story.I wish that I read it before.But ware are the pics?

Your story was amazing!

E mail me at jesseelopez@yahoo.com

I would love to know more about u.

I am a 29 yr old good looking guy.

xoxoxo

Aside from minor typos, this story was very good.

great its a real turn on for me keep up the good work

Loved the story and added it to my private collection (where I made some tweaks).

The story had potential, but the writing, spelling, and grammar mistakes made it very hard to read!!

Lucky girl

Getting the pool terminology correct would improve the story. But the main line was very hot.