All Comments on 'Pickup'

Excellent story in every detail. Exactly the kind of thing I like to read and like to write: a clever and amusing (and deliciously silly) set-up; well defined characters with conflicting, but ultimately resolvable, desires; and hot, well written sex. Plus, setting the action in the bed of a moving pickup was inspired. If only the story had gone on for another page and covered Chris, Becky and Meimi's first three-way it would be perfect in every detail. Aw, fuck it. It's perfect as is. Thanks. Keep writing.