All Comments on 'The Halloween Party'

I loved it was great and continue what you are doing,you are a good writer!

You are talented and creative. I enjoyed it. However, I would have loved for the slave to have actually inserted his tongue into her dripping pussy, instead of only licking her thighs. So close to her snatch, yet so far away.

This was a hot story. It could be improved but great just the same. Good luck in the contest.

Good action and was just short enough for a quick read. THX

I could just envision my own wife playing the part of the captured damsel. Very arousing story, thank you.