All Comments on 'Primal Eloquence'

beautiful

your partner in love and life must be a very lucky person.

Such beautiful wording and phrasing you have! I couldn't stop reading, and each sentence touched me deeply. It felt as if you had entered into my soul and saw what I crave more than anything. Absolutely glorious. I'll be coming back to this one again and again.

I dont even comment that much but holy shit this was one of the best lit porn ive ever had

A very well written story and a very enjoyable read. The way you have written the story and the language and certain terms used makes it sound like the two are were- wolves though you never describe them changing. Either way it was a very well written story with an excellent plot and character development. I gave it 5-STARS. Even though you ended the story OK, I would love to see you continue it showing the last 3 months of her pregnancy, the birth of their child, the 1st couple years of the child's life, and let your readers know wheither the parents really are werewolves. Retired Army NCO

Primal Eloquence (which is really a romance story) is much to short. It needs more of a build up, more character development- and more chapters. The author writes very well, and it is a shame that this story isn't much longer.

Loved the story. However, I wonder why you've not written new stories recently! I'm confidant that I and others would enjoy new stories.

So primal, so beautiful. It taps into me in a way that I cannot express but only feel. Thank you

Simply beautiful. Thank you

Beautiful, poetic, brilliant, what more can I say? You have a wonderful way with words and really do bring fantasy to life. 5 stars