All Comments on 'Kiss of the Night'

Excellent writing, hot erotica! Thank you to this author, keep writing.

Anonymous

You did a good job with the feel of the narrative. Your writing style really matches the story you're telling.

Liked the different story perspective. Good luck in the contest.

The author brings you right there, allowing you to feel the frustration and then the passion.

This is one of the few stories that tells it all in under a thousand words.

I'm impressed and look forward to more.

you wrote many of the parts of dream I used to have when I was a teen. If you think that is an insult think again. As I grew older the thoughts became more detailed with more cause and effect. That is/ was good, but it need not have been.

Thank you again