All Comments on 'Thanks, That Was Fun...'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh Geeze!

Abso-bloody-lutely loved this story! Laughed so hard, I ended up coughing and fell off my chair! Well...Who was the stranger and can I have one just like him???

Brillant story line and I hope everyone else who reads this enjoys it. Regards Jewellee Australia

Risq_001Risq_001over 14 years ago
Ok, its official, I'm lost

<p>I'm not saying its good or bad, that's why I gave it a 50% because I don't know <i>what</i> happened at the end of your story. What happen who was the man? What was Matt talking about? Huh?</p>

<p>I'm not trying to be dense, but I'm totally lost here</p>

-Risq

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent!!!

I loved this story, though part of me hopes it is not the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
keep it coming

that was really intriguing i'm excited for what's to come next

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
really really good

you def have caught my attention. excited to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
really really good

you def have caught my attention. excited to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
LOVE it!

Love it, please don't leave this as a cliffhanger for too long. (:

dirtdigger1955dirtdigger1955over 14 years ago
Short but sweet

Risq, clueless?..... Gotta love it. More to follow?, hopefully. Good start, keep it up.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Really short with a lot of unanswered questions

What happened to her at the bar and were her girl friends with her? Is anyone going to remember what happened after they left the bar? Thanks for the chapter.

ctdansctdansabout 2 years ago

Awesome. Leave something to the imagination (my ASS hurt so badly).

Only issue (I know this is not reality) was she so drunk at the time of sex where in some cases this is assault as she can't say no? I get that in the story it is really a revenge sex thing on her part so no, not rape or assault. But I would have a problem taking advantage of a drunk lady.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

Score 4/5 for the humor and 2/5 for the story in general. Maybe I'll come back and change my vote after I read chapter 2 and get a clearer picture of where this is headed. It reads like a description from an episode of "Friends". Replace "Jane" with "Rachel" and you can't tell the difference. 3/5

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