All Comments on 'Ravishing My Mother'

Seriously, one shitty short story after another. You guys really need to read more of the better authors here before putting out garbage like this.

I take it that English isn't the authors first language, so some of the strange sentences are to be expected.All in all the story is erotic and has merit. I think an English speaking editor would help make the work easier to read. Thanks

This is quite possibly one of the most taboo stories I've read on here. Not because of the sexual content, but because of the cultural. I say this because it's generally the mother who leads in a Middle-Eastern house-hold when it comes to rules to the children.

you need to learn some writing mechanics!!

Lern too spel befour u feel entitled two critisize orthors.

My dear friend, Please take the time to learn the english language in its entirety before you attempt to make an ass of yourself.

this is so stupid

What a disgusting shit !!

YOUR STORY IS SHIT. GIT GUD SCRUB

I'm assuming English isn't your first language? Please study it a lot more before writing another story. This would have been good if your words were better used and if there werent many mistakes

Absolutely Terrible

But with all the distractI got grammatical mistakes, I gave 4 stars.

But very good story!