All Comments on 'Happy New Year? Ch. 02'

Yes please.I like the build-up and the exhibitionism, rather than most stories which almost start with a swap

You've brought your audiance this far ... be nice and bring it on home to us! ;-)

I loved it. It felt very realistic with the order of events. I especially love the teasing under the table and the way Dan took Cathy as they watched their friends. Lots of sexual tension and pleasure while keeping a very interesting story line. I do hope you decided to continue into the next chapter. You did leave it open for a third and would be lovely to hear the rest of the story. Hopefully you'll get the inspiration.

1. Hot shit.

2 Great dialogue, characterization and plot.

3. Ooh I really want to read about the switch.

Very well written, believable. It should abolutely be continued.

Excellent, should have a chapter 3 for the swap may even lead to a chapter 4 that would lead to the eventual DP for each of the women. TY

This is a great story! I hope you round it out with a 3rd chapter!

yes, close to a real life experence. next would be getting together with soft swing. everything had to be together, all four helping each other not just couple and couple sex.

maybe games. then another story with another couple and soft swing.

Do write some more.

Loved it. Loved the slow tease and build up. And contrary to some other suggestions, I don't think it needs to go further... but if it does, I know you'll do a great job!

The build up to ecstasy proves exhilarating. Yes, you must tell us more. Have Scott and Cathy been seeing one another since summer vacation in Florida? (After all, they were in the ocean together when Dan first got an unobstructed view of Trish on the beach. Cathy seemed too eager to be dressing just for Dan on New Year's Eve. She seemed more like Trish on this night. Perhaps Scott and Cathy shared an intimate moment like Dan and Trish in Florida in the living room between the bedrooms in Florida?)

You can tempt us through a soft swing in Ch. 3 with intense foreplay by opposite spouses, and save a full swap for Ch. 4 and an orgy for Ch. 5!!! Regardless, you are a great storyteller and writer for we who fantasize ...

A swing in the next one please please please ! The story was brilliant !! And it would end briliantly with a DP !

It would have been even more enjoyable if the main male character had been created as a more mature man. He was really tentative and passive throughout the story. Maybe that was the idea, but it dampened the action with his cutesy approach to sexuality. I remember when it was sexy for the woman to always be the sexual instigator, but it isn't so sexy for me now. I like a self-confident male who's actively into the pursuit rather than holding back and hoping something happens.

But did Cathy and Scott mess around some during the vacation.?

Just found this story, it is so well written. Good build up and wonderful sense of ambiguity as to who knows what. Definitely would love a third chapter.

I've enjoyed your story and style tremendously. Now curiosity makes me yearn for more. Please?

I really want to read chapter 3 ++++.

Well written and stimulating - to say the least.

You have a great way of communicating a vision in words! Thank you!

Thanks : -) I loved this story and believe there needs to be a chapter three. What Happened throughout the year that changed Cathy so much? It seems as though she may have been in contact with and been influenced by Scott and Trish since Florida, shaving herself for example and becoming progressively less reserved to the extent of wanting to show off her body and having sex in front of them whilst watching them. I really do hope that you follow up from here.

Just discovered your stories.

Good vocabulary.

Good spelling.

Good grammar.

A good story well told. Sure would like to have some resolution.

A lot of time has passed. Can we have at least one more chapter.

This story definitely needs another chapter or two. Very good read.

Great story. I know another chapter would fit but I feel the story is complete at this point. Thanks.

Please continue!

This is great erotic writing. I love the character development and the sex scenes are well done and believable.

Yes, I'd like to see what happens next, and like another commenter I'd love some backstory on the motivation behind Cathy's change. Very hot story!

Very hot. Would love to read the sequel!!!

Disappointed that you dropped the story!