All Comments on 'intimations in my mouth'

Actually left me a little bit dizzy...

This poem was mentioned in today's New Poetry Recommendations in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum.<br><br>

This is an unexpected approach to the experience of giving a blowjob. The poetic craft evidenced here is also a pleasure to experience.

... the idea of eons crammed into one space, one time, one act. Beautiful.

loved it! wonderful words and descriptions

This poem, like a mouthful of sperm, contains huge number of ideas in a small space. I just felt one more sweep through the language would have improved it, and occasionally your usually adroit sense of rhythm escapes you. I hope you don't mind me saying so--I really enjoyed the poem.

and I mirror the sentiment of others. This is good.

Very hot. I never thought my cumming could be so tell-tale! But I suppose we are pretty vulnerable when we finally let go...