by StarrLust69
but you wait so long to update that it loses a lot of the tension. After such a long time it's hard to remember all the details and also hard to care about the characters or about what happens. I think if you posted a bit more frequently, more people would like your story.
but you wait so long to update that it loses a lot of the tension. After such a long time it's hard to remember all the details and also hard to care about the characters or about what happens. I think if you posted a bit more frequently, more people would like your story.