by themermaiden
One of the best I've read. Hope you continue this on, maybe into a series perhaps? It's be interesting to see what else you come up with
Another great short story. Didn't like this one as much as your other but still wonderful.
Your paragraph structure is very repetitive, otherwise a good story
great story. love how shes not a slut, but he likes her anyway. adds some romance to it =)
I like the hesitancy/reluctance without being forced. I would like to see a bit more of a lead up and drawn out seduction though! Great story!
i like it ....shes not a slut and hes got eyes for her plus its not too forced or 70 year old with an 18 year old-ish ...also sexy lead up
Hey i really liked this story i really lik ed how she wasnat a slut an that they didnt do every single pastion lol it was a good story that keeped u not nowing wat was going to happen ? I was wondering if ther ewill be another story as in wat happens wen they meet again is it akward or to they hav a relationship?
I loved the story. I'm pretty sure every one had a crush on a teacher at one point of their life. I have. It was a fun story to read. I hope you keep on going with this story... :-)
Very organized for a first try. Good dialog too.
I could see a sequel with her discussing the experience with the other girls and getting remarks like "Where have you been all this time?' Etc.