All Comments on 'Teach Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fucking loved it

One of the best I've read. Hope you continue this on, maybe into a series perhaps? It's be interesting to see what else you come up with

dacthdacthabout 14 years ago
Great Story

WOW! Loved the story. Please write more.

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 14 years ago
Great

Another great short story. Didn't like this one as much as your other but still wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
yes!

this was amazing best story iv ever read:) keep writing:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Parragraphs

Your paragraph structure is very repetitive, otherwise a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

great story. love how shes not a slut, but he likes her anyway. adds some romance to it =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
awesome!

I like the hesitancy/reluctance without being forced. I would like to see a bit more of a lead up and drawn out seduction though! Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hott

i like it ....shes not a slut and hes got eyes for her plus its not too forced or 70 year old with an 18 year old-ish ...also sexy lead up

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Hey i really liked this story i really lik ed how she wasnat a slut an that they didnt do every single pastion lol it was a good story that keeped u not nowing wat was going to happen ? I was wondering if ther ewill be another story as in wat happens wen they meet again is it akward or to they hav a relationship?

shouldvesaidno91shouldvesaidno91over 11 years ago
Great!

Well written and a fun read! Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Teacher...yum

I loved the story. I'm pretty sure every one had a crush on a teacher at one point of their life. I have. It was a fun story to read. I hope you keep on going with this story... :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Very organized for a first try. Good dialog too.

I could see a sequel with her discussing the experience with the other girls and getting remarks like "Where have you been all this time?' Etc.

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