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Burglar

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/18/10

nice work...

i liked how this story went...her fantasy
come to life...how lucky for her.
they could be win-win for each other.
will there be more?

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by Anonymous09/06/11

Loved it

It was a great fantasy become a reality story but I do wish you went alittle longer with it, maybe how he makes his escape. It just feels like it ended too abruptly. And the band aids over her eyes kind of bother me.

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by ProfTiny07/16/13

Great Story

Loved it. Will read more of your submissions. Good sexual tension.

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