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All Comments on 'Heat in October'

by Luxx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
To fast

Slow down, develop your story. This could be much better if it wasn't a 2 minute read.

CuriosityCanKillCuriosityCanKillalmost 14 years ago
Great job.

I get accused of writing too short of stories as well. Different people want different things.

I really liked the violence and control he had. Good job.

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