All Comments on 'For the Stranger in 6B Ch. 03'

Please use an editor or ask someone to read over your work. The paragraphs are too BIG, make them small next time. The was good so full points.

It was a HOT story, every trucker will like it (: I don't agree with the first commentor about big paragraphs.

Very good story. Don't know why the "fuss" about "BIG" Paragraphs. It was a good story and I enjoyed it, that's what important. Paris Hilton, nah.....someone like Monica Bellucci, anytime ;-)Thanks for sharing.

You nevr fail to astound me with how you describe the "action" that you want to convey. The sharing thing still gets me, but I working on being less selfish

I love the way you build each chapter on the next. Plus, you have that special way of illustrating the story with words to make the reader FEEL like they are actually there watching the story unfold before their eyes. The details you include are remakable.

Warm stick regards,

Le chef passionné

Excellent as always, you sure do tell a great story.