All Comments on 'Ellie's Public Display'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well done!

Thoroughly enjoyed that!

barepussloverbarepussloverover 14 years ago
Wow!!

Hot!! Always up for a good viewing and memories!!! Additional chapters for this one? :-)

Gitano71Gitano71over 14 years ago
very nice

short but very thrilling n an enjoyable read

AceStrokerAceStrokerover 13 years ago
An Eyeful

It is an interesting conflict of emotions in times like these. When accidental exposure happens, sheer panic and embarrassment overwhelm the person on display. But days or months afterward, the eroticism of the experience grows, as does the memory! You captured that part quite nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Next

Great!! I loved it. I am anxious to read your other stories.

nadinephillipsnadinephillipsabout 11 years ago
Lovely and sexy

I loved the story, great imagination (or is this reality?) and how she became ashamed from being exposed.....but found out how much her body enjoyed it. It is fun to realize how humiliation can inflame our needs and desire for more....oh where oh where does it end?????? Hugs Nadine

jman337jman337over 10 years ago

It needs a sequel though

NekidinazNekidinazover 9 years ago
Exquisitely Erotic...

I totally agree with both AceStroker and nadinephillips' comments! I've been in a similar situation (although I'm male) where I was nude and embarassed to be seen...not ashamed but, well, you know ;) The "after memory" was far more erotic than the moment and lent itself to how I reacted in subsequent nude encounters...as nadine says, "...It is fun to realize how humiliation can inflame our needs and desire for more..."

maddictmaddictover 9 years ago
Delighted to.....

I would of liked to have been enough of a gentleman and quick enough to have help her with a bag at least and offered my seat. Then ordered her a cappuccino or could she at least join us. Trying to delay her return to her car.*~*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
hot wife

My wife and I got on a subway that was crowded as we walked the aisle her skirt was just below her pussy. Several guys that were seated reached under her skirt and rubbed her pussy. She didn't stop them in fact she almost stopped walking as they continued to feel her pussy. They got bolder and reached in her panties. I should have stopped them but she seemed to enjoy it as I was getting hard. She saw my cock sticking out and giggled that she thought I was liking it as much as she was. She was right in front of one guy and he pulled her skirt up and pulled her to his mouth and started licking her while she came. Next time she said she may let a guy slide his cock in her. I can't wait so I can lick her pussy clean.o

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PoorwriterPoorwriterover 8 years ago
All time favorite.

This is my all time favorite Literotica story. It is exactly what I love to read. No overt or raunchy sex. No one even doing anything wrong. Just a moment of time captured that is filled with eroticism, delight and a mix of feelings. Great story!

clippymustdieclippymustdieover 8 years ago
thanks.

She needs a sequel. Needs to by some shoes. Or walk slowly up a staircase. . .

Thanks. v

BarbieKenBarbieKenabout 8 years ago
Great story

The supposed accidental exposure is what I truly enjoy and strive for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story

I liked your story but I didn't think Ellie should be saying "fuck" when she realized the men were viewing her bare pussy. Seemed too corse to me. Good job describing her vagina.

ColonelLingezColonelLingezalmost 7 years ago
Wow

That was awesome. Fun, sexy, and not over the top. Quick, clean and simple yet well developed in my opinion. (not sure if that is the best way to describe it but best I can put into words)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Where is this full story?

I have seen 6-7 chapters of this story. Where can the entire story be found?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Whew!

So hot! You described exactly my first wife's pussy--and, BTW, she was seen by many men, also. The thought of the power over men to turn them on and control them with what was between her legs was intense and enjoyable to her--and others.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

Very well done, the way you described it I would have loved to be one of those other observers.

Fag4BBCFag4BBCabout 1 month ago

Absolutely wonderful the way you describe the visual is so awesome put the picture right in my head as if I was sitting at the table with the doc and mayor! And please more of her story and journey of public exposing herself

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