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Let not her blue eyes sparkle

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/02/09

Fatality

For fatality

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by JazCullen12/16/10

Loved it!

I was recommended to read this by a very good friend and I was not disappointed.

Totally loved this poem. You have a talent with words.

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by lostchicken01/01/11

Simply Beautiful

I am a huge fan of 'bad weather' and you captured everything beautifully. I understood everything and felt as if I was there, a fly on the wall watching everything.

Simply Beautiful!

Fatality must be tickled pink!

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by amy6908/03/11

Visually Moving!!!

You pulled me in. I felt as if I was there apart of it all. Truly beautiful!

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