by Alfamann
This was a compelling climax to the longer story, bold and exciting. I look forward to more stories from you, I hope!
I love the fact she peed in that diaper in front of everyone...and was caught out... omg!!
It was OK until it went past "possible" and into the realms of fantasy. That plain spoiled it.
Just keeps getting better and better. I really hope there's more. Loved the introduction of the diapers
A really nice series you have here! I do hope you continue on with it and give us all more stories of the newly weds and their growing acceptance of their sexuality.
Oh my god. THis is Amazing. It's like you can see inside my head... you are truly gifted as a writer,
Was hoping against hope that the mother with lactating breasts and nursing her child might have requested that she wait and let her feed for real on her 'mother's' nipples.
What I liked most was the way you eased your characters into this. Made it believable and allowed me to go along for the ride. You have a strong storyteller’s voice and you set a good pace without a hurried tone, ratcheting up the action and tension with each new scene. Not easy to accomplish and I really appreciate it when it’s done well.
Thank you for sharing this. Enjoyed it very much.
Very well written. I feel you could have carried the story further. Angie could go to stay with her Aunties, sleep over etc. Peter could be sent to stay or even live part time with some new uncles, and learn how to be a good boy for them.
Perhaps Angie could spend the night with Alice, as could Peter.
So many possibiliries!
Certainly 5 stars