by Ikay
try using the nonconsensual area for shit like this it sounds like the police need to talk to you or maybe they should talk to your sister and neighbors
If you can write that she loved all of the attention and wanting her brother to fuck her after the gang bang would have takes some of the rape sting out of the story. thanks
The way Lynn began the story describing her tits was good. It definitely made it clear her breasts were the focus of the story. They described them well by describing other peoples' reactions and gave a nice description of their shape and size without resorting to just stating a size and some measurment. However after that the story just dropped off like the author wanted to rush through the sex. It just seemed pieced together like a few bits and leftovers from another story were thrown in to make one short story.
Why isn't there another installment I wanted to finish... Reading I mean