by Krenna Smart
I enjoyed the theme of this poem as well as your treatment of it. Then your summing up of the poem and of life in the last five lines is quite inspired.<br><br>
I think those last lines on their own are quite brilliant and I would humbly suggest that they become a poem all on their own:<br><br>
Life<br>
A sand castle<br>
Built by children<br>
In the morning sun<br><br>
Washed away by the evening tide<br>