All Comments on 'The Massage'

by Trichy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Run of the mill...

The story had potential but I don't like the way you tell it.

Stories written in the 2nd person are usually a turn off and this one is not an exception. May be it can arise that 2nd person though...

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