All Comments on 'The Broussard Sisters Ch. 07'

I am worried about Elizabeth though, Elaine should tell her about her brother obsessing over her! Great story all around

I've been enjoying this site for at least three years and this is the first time I've really felt the need to comment. Love the story, and the cast of characters. You've created a living breathing small town. I see that the time frame of the story so far has been rather short. 2 months or so? I hope the level of detail you are putting in(which I enjoy) doesn't burn you out as I'd really like to see what happens to all these people. The only thing that nags me a bit is that Paul is a bit TOO confident. I'd expect to see at least a bit of self doubt with the current situation as he seems to have a pretty solid religious upbringing and is truly a nice guy. A little self reflection on what he is doing with three sweet rather naive girls would be in order. Also a little clairification on what Candy and Cindy's parents think is going on would be nice. I suspect they think he is going out with one of them and he's so nice that he doesn't mind spending time with her best friend as well. But I could be wrong. Anyway, keep it up! It's a real treat to read.

Please.... it's been over a month. Next chapter

Much less depressing than the last chapter and a few people getting what they had coming and a few people getting what they had cumming ;)

...I gotta say though, more fucking misspellings of Elizabeht's, I mean Elizabeth's name than I would have thought possible! Considering all the chapters that the author has put out I'm really surprised at the non-editing! I usually self edit as I go... Hell, all you have to do is type your story here in a comment box, occasionally copy and paste it to a text file to make sure you don't lose it and you're done! The comment box highlights all the obvious mistakes! :). ...it even highlighted the misspelled name above!

...anyway still love the story, spelling or not :)

the constant whining over spelling and grammar. This ain't nuclear-meta-physic folks. Jezeus, if you can't figure out the meaning of dialog in context, how the fuck do you ever get through your day?

And your inability at multi-tasking, explains why your car insurance rates are so high!

Shakespeare spelled his own name a dozen different ways. Hell, if you want to decipher missed spellings try reading an original letter from George Washington.

And the only reason Isaac Newton is famous today is because of the brilliant genius of Émilie du Châtelet, correcting his mathematical errors and translating his Latin gibberish into readable French.

Still loving the story, please keep up the good work!

Put a “disgusting” warning before all the tranny daphne stuff. Or warn in chapter 1 that there will be trannies before the reader gets invested in what is otherwise a good story.