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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
No dialogue?

Not a single spoken word? No murmured caress? I missed that in this story. (If she had spoken his name it would deepen the mystery.) The deluge of adjectives slowed me down at times. I'm rating this story 100, though, because it's still a well crafted interlude.

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