All Comments on 'My Story'

is well portrayed here...much wisdom in the play..blue

This shows insight. If this is based on something real, then I think you might be moving into a better future; insight is always the helping hand in these things.

I know some of your story from prior postings and indirectly from a career in observing the same behaviors in troubled souls. This piece is sentimental. I mean that in the best meaning of the word. I could quibble about "poetic components" of this, but there are times (at least for me) when content is so compelling that the thematic structure, which is good, flows easily and reaches the poet's intentions. I don't need a lot of metaphor here to imagine so many different things.