by Bakeboss
Could have been a good story, but the vast majority of your readers don't use Ecstasy.....Could have been a believable story, but nope....
A great story on rekindled love. The author showed he knows true love
Nice idea but you could have teased it out a bit slower - played with the marital emotions a tad more.
Anyway, I enjoyed it and good luck in the contest.
I like stories of romance between married or otherwise committed persons. However, I would have preferred omitting the drugs and it could have used some better editing.