All Comments on 'A Ski Trip to Hell'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Pleasantly surprised....

-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ecstasy?????

Could have been a good story, but the vast majority of your readers don't use Ecstasy.....Could have been a believable story, but nope....

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A true love story

A great story on rekindled love. The author showed he knows true love

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Don't give up hope

I liked the advice at the end

lancewmlancewmover 14 years ago
Loved it

Wonderful, heart warming read. Could have left out the E..

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 14 years ago
A Bit Rushed

Nice idea but you could have teased it out a bit slower - played with the marital emotions a tad more.

Anyway, I enjoyed it and good luck in the contest.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years ago
It was okay

I like stories of romance between married or otherwise committed persons. However, I would have preferred omitting the drugs and it could have used some better editing.

hathorbr1hathorbr1almost 12 years ago
Not Bad!

It was a good story! Good Job!

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