All Comments on 'Under the Evergreen'

i really really liked this a lot. good job :]

Loved the humanity, the gentle comunication. Thank you.

So, I really liked your story, I think you're a great writer but unfortunately it didn't hit the spot for me because I don't think it's realistic. I know these are erotic stories and they are not necessarily supposed to be realistic, but I have actually tried this before (not in a christmas tree stand, but outside in the snow nevertheless) and it is really uncomfortable. It was so incredibly cold that neither of us could climax, and let me tell you, we were trying in a number of different ways. And we had the right gear for it. I guess I could have overlooked that for the fucking part, but the falling asleep part? Just how big is this guys jacket? And was she wearing a thermarest as a kilt or what?