by Reshbod
....think it serves her right? (sorry but I had to pay 50 points to have my disbelief suspended enough to buy the 'penis poking in grab'!)-pistolpackinpete
It takes a pretty stupid ass hole to read a story, that is obviously nothing more than a jack off story, and not recognize right off that it's not meant to be taken seriously.
I enjoyed it as it was meant to be enjoyed, wanking my cock.
By all means jack off then ass hole, personally it didn't turn me on at all. I'd love to see some idiot try this in the real world, talk about losing a dick.
As with all stories I look at how imaginative the author has presented the story line and with this one it was done well.I would like to read the next chapter on how she will explain to her lover what happened to her in the men's restroom. If she doesn't say anything, and it was her lover she would be thought of as cheating. If she tells her lover what happened, and it wasn't him that she had her tryst with, then he could drop her like a hot rock. Interesting scenerio. Thanks
That was a great story. Imaginative and well told. The problem with most literotic readers who look for "loving wives" stories is that they want the same thing: wife sleeps with some other guy, and husband gets his revenge on wife. If your story doesn't go in line with the status quo, then you're pretty fucked - according to them.
Keep doing your thing.
how could they arrive at the same bathroom at the same time and not know who was who? Also, didn't Glen hear her call his name? Bathroom stalls aren't soundproof.
Glad to see you have quit writing and have resume your normal position of sucking cock. This bloody author is a flaming fag!
An unknown assailant pretends to be her husband to have intercourse with a woman.
I think that is called rape.
Or maybe you need a new section called "Women who are too irresponsible to have a vagina"