All Comments on 'Brighton Grad - Wedded Bliss'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Glad you came back

Thanks you for adding an ending to your story. Dreams can come true. It was worth the wait. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
seems like a nice story

they only has passionate sex with their spouses, no dishonor, no selfishness, no disrespect - isn't that against the rules for a loving wives story? it certainly is rare! <P>

<B>KUDOS!</B>

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awsome

Thank you for adding an ending to this story. I have been checking on this story every week seeing if anything had been added to it. This is one of my favorite stories on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More

I wanted fuckin more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

Please continue writing chapters to this story.will they start a family etc

JAUNTYOLDONEJAUNTYOLDONEabout 9 years ago
Nobel Effort

It's a shame that there is no Nobel Prize for Erotic Literature because in my opinion your 6 part series is worthy of one. If (when) you write more about them please consider putting it all together and finding a Publisher.

ZigmysterZigmysterover 6 years ago

Enjoyed reading this. Only 2 problems that I noticed. Who is Jerry and Henry? The other is when Walter answered the wakeup call. He asked for a bus boy to bring their luggage down. Think you meant bellboy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Surprise Pregnancy

Marjorie must fall pregnant.You should articulate their reaction,how they inform their news to walters family and to Doug and their reaction.You should describe it well and give cute moments of their married life.

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